I like particularly the way it loops. Could be a nice e-card or something like that.
Why did you blank out the word idiot?
I was too lazy for writing the word "idiot" propely... that's why
After seeing this...
I am severely disturbed. Nice job though. I like your drawing style.
Nice artwork, nice story, just you could add a lower graphics setting (If there is one I'm an idiot)
I love this
This is a great game. Point taken about the upgrades. Nice job.
1: The vocals. They're overdone - your voice just isn't raspy like you're trying to make it sound. Use effects or get someone who can speak like that better.
2: The cymbals. They kind of form the spine of your piece, holding it together, but the rhythm is either reasonably complicated, there isn't one, or i just don't get it. Simplify them - when they cut in at 00:41, they have potential, but the times aren't exactly right, at least not in my ears.
Overall, though, very good. I appreciate you thrashing out a back story BEFORE you write the music rather than after.
Thanks for the feedback. I know my voice isn't nearly deep enough for what I wanted but effects weren't working out, if I had a sound sample that would've been best I suppose. I know that the beat of the song is hard to get a grasp of and that's why the cymbals sound weird like that; this isn't something I'm going to change but I can see that it's off-putting for some people. Thanks for the comment and the 8, they are much appreciated :)
I personally consider it an improvement on both songs.
You have interesting dreams; this could be a boss battle, but i see it more as a kind of chase song. Very ice job though.
yea, doesn't really have a chariot feel at all lol..
that trombone makes me think of something huge and scary coming out of the ground to give chase.
a chasey feel...
glad you like :)
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