1: The vocals. They're overdone - your voice just isn't raspy like you're trying to make it sound. Use effects or get someone who can speak like that better.
2: The cymbals. They kind of form the spine of your piece, holding it together, but the rhythm is either reasonably complicated, there isn't one, or i just don't get it. Simplify them - when they cut in at 00:41, they have potential, but the times aren't exactly right, at least not in my ears.
Overall, though, very good. I appreciate you thrashing out a back story BEFORE you write the music rather than after.
Thanks for the feedback. I know my voice isn't nearly deep enough for what I wanted but effects weren't working out, if I had a sound sample that would've been best I suppose. I know that the beat of the song is hard to get a grasp of and that's why the cymbals sound weird like that; this isn't something I'm going to change but I can see that it's off-putting for some people. Thanks for the comment and the 8, they are much appreciated :)
I personally consider it an improvement on both songs.
You have interesting dreams; this could be a boss battle, but i see it more as a kind of chase song. Very ice job though.
yea, doesn't really have a chariot feel at all lol..
that trombone makes me think of something huge and scary coming out of the ground to give chase.
a chasey feel...
glad you like :)
I just want to tell you:
I am planning to build a Super Smash Brothers Game. I could find no possible application for this song, and I have a limited amount of space left on my computer- but I downloaded this song anyway. I loved this song. A perfect remix.
Thank you. I am glad to hear you like my music. I'm sorry to hear about the lack of space and how much this takes on your computer.
This is great.
I honestly like this better than the version that plays at final destination. I'm using this in my game.
I'm surprised this hasn't been used in a flash- this would kick ass as a soundtrack to a boss. Imagine it- in the Coliseum or something. I think if you were a more popular artist (and I can't imagine why you're not) this would be used a lot more often.
I love the rhythm. I'm actually thinking about using this in a flash of mine.
When it finally comes out I want to see it.
I like it.
It's pretty good- the instruments and vocals are in perfect balance. My one criticism is that it's not really a loop. Making it one would improve the song a lot. What I'm asking is to remove the seven seconds of nothing at the end of the song.
Love your music. This is a nice style, you're slightly off in rythym, which i assumed was deliberate, as it makes the piece sound so much better.
Dude, I love your songs.
But i sense that you've been going away from your old really good ones, like The Beginning of Time and some other ones that I cannot remember the name of. Try to go back to that style, and maybe blend it with this one a little. I recognize that this is a standalone dance song, but still try to go back a bit to where you were.
I'm all over bro. Don't worry. I'm still sticking with everything.
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