were-panther's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario's Fail]

Not bad

Why did you blank out the word idiot?

JosephAS1 responds:

I was too lazy for writing the word "idiot" propely... that's why

[NEVER do this with a gun!]

Its crap.

For being honest ill be nice and give you a 4.

pivotmasteruk responds:

thanks. i know its not my best work. but im hoping 2 improve soon

[THE.LIFT.]

Nice!

I really like your style, how the people are transparent! What you could improve is clarity- I didn't understand parts of it at first. The two pictures the guy was holding... I didn't get it. But I like it anyway! 5/5.

beccahyman responds:

Yeah i think maybe bits of it moved to quickly? And it was a bit cryptic, but i didn't intend for it to be completely incomprehensible. It's about an affair, hope that helps. Thanks for commenting on the style, and advice is always welcome.