Very nice...

I like particularly the way it loops. Could be a nice e-card or something like that.

Not bad

Why did you blank out the word idiot?

After seeing this...

I am severely disturbed. Nice job though. I like your drawing style.

addicting

6th place!

Beautiful

Nice artwork, nice story, just you could add a lower graphics setting (If there is one I'm an idiot)

I love this

This is a great game. Point taken about the upgrades. Nice job.

2 problems

1: The vocals. They're overdone - your voice just isn't raspy like you're trying to make it sound. Use effects or get someone who can speak like that better.

2: The cymbals. They kind of form the spine of your piece, holding it together, but the rhythm is either reasonably complicated, there isn't one, or i just don't get it. Simplify them - when they cut in at 00:41, they have potential, but the times aren't exactly right, at least not in my ears.

Overall, though, very good. I appreciate you thrashing out a back story BEFORE you write the music rather than after.

Um what?

You have interesting dreams; this could be a boss battle, but i see it more as a kind of chase song. Very ice job though.