were-panther's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Leaving Death in Their Wake]

2 problems

1: The vocals. They're overdone - your voice just isn't raspy like you're trying to make it sound. Use effects or get someone who can speak like that better.

2: The cymbals. They kind of form the spine of your piece, holding it together, but the rhythm is either reasonably complicated, there isn't one, or i just don't get it. Simplify them - when they cut in at 00:41, they have potential, but the times aren't exactly right, at least not in my ears.

Overall, though, very good. I appreciate you thrashing out a back story BEFORE you write the music rather than after.

Cmdtrigun responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I know my voice isn't nearly deep enough for what I wanted but effects weren't working out, if I had a sound sample that would've been best I suppose. I know that the beat of the song is hard to get a grasp of and that's why the cymbals sound weird like that; this isn't something I'm going to change but I can see that it's off-putting for some people. Thanks for the comment and the 8, they are much appreciated :)

["dread battle"]

Um what?

You have interesting dreams; this could be a boss battle, but i see it more as a kind of chase song. Very ice job though.

Ankalegon responds:

yea, doesn't really have a chariot feel at all lol..
that trombone makes me think of something huge and scary coming out of the ground to give chase.
a chasey feel...
glad you like :)

[Haunts of Lavender]

I just want to tell you:

I am planning to build a Super Smash Brothers Game. I could find no possible application for this song, and I have a limited amount of space left on my computer- but I downloaded this song anyway. I loved this song. A perfect remix.

Ihsman07 responds:

Thank you. I am glad to hear you like my music. I'm sorry to hear about the lack of space and how much this takes on your computer.

[Deixo Outlaws]

Great.

I love the rhythm. I'm actually thinking about using this in a flash of mine.

TheCon-Sept responds:

When it finally comes out I want to see it.

[{dj-N} Roflcopter]

Dude, I love your songs.

But i sense that you've been going away from your old really good ones, like The Beginning of Time and some other ones that I cannot remember the name of. Try to go back to that style, and maybe blend it with this one a little. I recognize that this is a standalone dance song, but still try to go back a bit to where you were.

dj-Nate responds:

I'm all over bro. Don't worry. I'm still sticking with everything.

[Alabama]

Good.

The synth strings in the first part are slightly off key, but then they get better. That may be intended to be dissonance, you tell me. What I don't understand, though, is why it's called Alabama. 9/10, 5/5.

djdragonboy responds:

Alabama is where we opened the recording studio. I started playing around just to test the gear and ended up writing a song. The strings are the JX10, which may not have been calibrated at the time.

[Sonic Heroes - Mystic Mansion]

Great remix.

5/5, 10/10. Sonic Heroes was the only Sonic game I ever played, and I liked it a lot. This is a great remix.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

YOURE KIDDING ME?

You got some catching up to do. But I can guarantee you'll come to love Sonic. Thnx for the review

[Bejeweled Twist - Level 3]

Great.

To brerak the monotony that sorta develops, you could use really cool panning or do some volume changes. Probably both.

PaulyBFromDa303 responds:

I thought I tried too hard when holding out that monotone, I know exactly what you mean, and you could be right.

[Crapacapella Gold Version]

Kinda funny...

Are all the voices you?

StrawberrySoda1 responds:

Yes~

[The Cellular Divide]

I would call this Ambient

This is really good. It may not be too exciting (you can work on that) but to me it shows musical talent.

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

Thanks.